Charcoal Portrait Post Critique

After being critiqued by the class, they pointed out some small details that I initailly didn’t see. Some of the details where to fix the mouth on the portrait to make it not as flat as it is and to make it pop more. Another detail that could be improved and the eyebrows on the face appear to be too small to the original picture used as reference. To fix this I would have them a little larger and have them look like eyebrows. The more noticable detail is the noise of the background and the transition of the black to white background. Using a shammie use help reduce the noise and also help with the transitions.

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About ciolekaj

I am a student at Alfred State College in the Digital Media and Animation Department. I've always had a passion for drawing and wanted to learn more to improve on it. I one day hope to create a video game I designed with the help of the skills im learn while at Alfred.
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