Peer Review: Matt Delorme

This is a critique of a fellow class mate, Matt Delorme, on our first assignment in our Productions I class

Matt Delorme’s Word Press

Symmetrically Balanced Photo:

When only focusing on the lines made by the walls, ceiling, and floor, the photo does appear to be symmetrical. Focusing on the doors, however, the photo isn’t has symmetrical. If the doors were directly across from each other, then the entire photo would be symmetrical.

Asymmetrical Photo:

This photo is a good demonstration of asymmetry. The figure draws more attention to the left of the image than the right.

Close Up:

The eyes of the figure line up with the top horizontal line of the Rule of Thirds. There is also a respectable amount of head room.

Long Shot:

The figure’s right eye lines up with the intersecting corner of the Rule of Thirds.

Balance with Weight Gaze:

The photo would be have a weighted balance if the figure was either looking to the left of the photo or if  the figure was on the left side of the photo looking right. This photo cannot be balanced because the figure is doing neither of these.


About ciolekaj

I am a student at Alfred State College in the Digital Media and Animation Department. I've always had a passion for drawing and wanted to learn more to improve on it. I one day hope to create a video game I designed with the help of the skills im learn while at Alfred.
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